Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Magpie Journey Begins

I open my eyes I see not a scene in position.
I look back in mirror I see tatterdemalion dreams, hopes and aspirations.
I close my eyes I see days ahead fulfilling those dreams unrealized and unceasing  jubilation.

written for mag 37
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
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21 comments:

  1. DeborahOctober 20, 2010 at 1:15 AM

    Wonderful, I love this :o)

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  2. UnknownOctober 20, 2010 at 5:49 AM

    Its nice :)

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  3. Uma AnandaneOctober 20, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    Beautiful!

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  4. JaspreetOctober 20, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    Sometimes its better to just look forward rather than looking at the past and brooding over it.Expressed beautifully! :)

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  5. Business IQOctober 20, 2010 at 1:18 PM

    Simple and beautiful. Wonderful use of tatterdemalion!

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  6. ReflectionsOctober 20, 2010 at 2:13 PM

    Beautifully stated, yet simple. Very nice.

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  7. *October 20, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    Jubilation, now that's a word that should be used more, in poetry & every day! Loved your Magpie!

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  8. UnknownOctober 20, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    this was indeed a celebration!

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  9. Kathe W.October 21, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    looking forward! Yes!

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  10. LynOctober 22, 2010 at 4:47 AM

    Very well done..I could feel the intention to go on!!

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 22, 2010 at 6:12 AM

    cool sentiments,
    lovely tale.
    looking forward is a yea for all.

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  12. UnknownOctober 22, 2010 at 6:53 AM

    Wordplay here is lovely. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

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  13. Sue JOctober 22, 2010 at 8:04 PM

    Love the way you expressed yourself.

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  14. Brian MillerOctober 23, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    dang wonderful use of words...ineed to look up tatterdamelion...that is really cool...keep looking forward...

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  15. ClaudiaOctober 23, 2010 at 10:40 AM

    sometimes we see most with eyes closed..really liked this

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  16. KatherineOctober 23, 2010 at 11:55 PM

    I, like Brian, learned a new word ... so much wonderful expression in not so many words. Poetically Perfect!

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  17. Vinay Leo R.October 24, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    best to look ahead, rather than to focus on what's gone! :) lovely take..

    My Magpie is Here

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  18. little wing writerOctober 24, 2010 at 7:38 PM

    you captured the window well... rainy curtain

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  19. Tess KincaidOctober 25, 2010 at 5:34 AM

    Tatterdemalion is such a great word! Well done.

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  20. Sh@sNovember 2, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    Beautiful :)

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  21. vineetNovember 23, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    well written, crisp n yet n exhaustv description, loved it

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